Dear Legate,
I have reviewed your laws and find them as splendid as anticipated.
I am particularly pleased with the plan to crack down on Laches as it will curtail Janissaries who would leverage the threat of a case as blackmail in perpetuity.
Well done, truly.
The only change I might suggest is the mention of undermining Legates under the Treason law. I expect many Voiced to protest such under the assumption that it is an expansion of Legate authority.
I would remind you both that you will not be Legate forever and the office could be taken by another Sol Auk type, as well as the fact that my own protests against Marcellus could have been considered "undermining" him.
I believe the right to protest a Legate's actions without fear of legal reprisal is important to any Asterabadian government.
It is a minor concern, however, in an otherwise well written and thought out set of laws.
Regards,
Apothar Estellise Azimi
I have reviewed your laws and find them as splendid as anticipated.
I am particularly pleased with the plan to crack down on Laches as it will curtail Janissaries who would leverage the threat of a case as blackmail in perpetuity.
Well done, truly.
The only change I might suggest is the mention of undermining Legates under the Treason law. I expect many Voiced to protest such under the assumption that it is an expansion of Legate authority.
I would remind you both that you will not be Legate forever and the office could be taken by another Sol Auk type, as well as the fact that my own protests against Marcellus could have been considered "undermining" him.
I believe the right to protest a Legate's actions without fear of legal reprisal is important to any Asterabadian government.
It is a minor concern, however, in an otherwise well written and thought out set of laws.
Regards,
Apothar Estellise Azimi