I'm going to use this thread to report any typos in the conversations or narrative text related to entering the server and initial user experience, since these will be the areas by which new players judge the server. Any little nit-picky thing I catch, I'll post here.
- Found a typo in Lanfaer Glitterwill's conversation. After choosing the "What is going on?" conversation choice, then following up with "Catastrophe? Curse....?" the second sentence of the resulting paragraph is "She has cursed the Island and all who dwell her[e] with her Withering." Figure that first "her" should be "here."
- Narrative text upon first appearing in the Ziggurat says, "In a shocking display of magic, you are ripped from your former life and deposited here at the heightest part of this ruined Ziggurat." "Heightest" should be "highest."
- In the 2-4 Sarcophagus quest there is a typo in the conversation of an NPC atop a tower. She says, "... the shriek of a lamed beast as it torn from behind ..." should be the word "is" between "it" and "torn."
- Old Muskroot's conversation, "... so that you may heard what is said ..." "heard" should be "hear."
All fixed. Thank you reporting this, death to typos.
Sleepy Elven Adventurer, Halls of Governance:
"They have a Mayor .. so, strange .. I had dreamed there would be a King."
Should be:
"They have a mayor... so strange... I had dreamed there would be a king."
War Refugee, the Last Keep, Lower Level:
"The years have been hard to us all. Spair a coin, sire?"
Should be
"Spare a coin, sire?"
Fixed.
More than a typo, but a similar level of urgency:
The description for the "Village Stash" placeable in the Unyielding camp is set to that of a stew.
Fixed.
The fellow standing guard outside the Aberdenn hall is named "Aberdeen House Guard". Should probably be "Aberdenn House Guard".
Under the Info tab on the Forums here... In the Mistlocke Manual, under Mechanics, then New Cleric Domains... the Law Domain Spells are merged at the end of the Illusion Domain Spells listing. Law Domain should be given a separate heading between Illusion and Luck.
Quote from: Somniis;246477Under the Info tab on the Forums here... In the Mistlocke Manual, under Mechanics, then New Cleric Domains... the Law Domain Spells are merged at the end of the Illusion Domain Spells listing. Law Domain should be given a separate heading between Illusion and Luck.
Might I request that we have two threads, one for Website typos and one for typos in the module? If you could re-post yours Somniis with the thread subject of "[WEBSITE] Typos", that would be great.
This is only because the people who deal with them are quite separate!
http://www.escapefromundeath.com/forums/showthread.php?t=46282
On that thread the link to the DM Factions and You thing isn't being set as a link. Have to copy and paste it for it to work. On the topic of website typos :) Not related to typos, but if the Roleplaying Attributes thread could be returned, that would rock. It's currently stuck in a DM only page since it was in info for new players. A very useful tool that might make a good addition to the stickies list.
http://www.escapefromundeath.com/forums/showthread.php?t=46282
Website typo: On that thread the link to the DM Factions and You page isn't being set as a link. Have to copy and paste it for it to work. Also not related to typos but related to that linked page, if the Roleplaying Attributes thread could be returned, that would rock. It's currently stuck in a DM only page since it was in info for new players. A very useful tool that might make a good addition to the stickies list.
Inside the Beginners Abandoned Supplies Quest, there is a corpse of an "Long Dead Dominion Citizen" and right next to him is a "clutched old paper". Within the paper ... "and ordered a general embargo ..." It presently reads "gemeral".
Fixed (IG typos only, I'm not messing with the website)
Another IG one; The triggered blue combat log text that appears when crossing the bridge into Mistlocke. It reads: "A narrow, deep river flows smoothly below. Strange flickering forms and ->figure<- almost seem to be moving about in its depths." 'Figure' should be 'figures'.
Fixed.
Woven mushroom-fiber gardening gloves have two +1 lore. It doesn't stack or anything, so thought it might be a typo. Without giving away any more stats than the lore it looks like, for example:
Stuff
Stuff
Lore +1
Lore +1
stuff
The description on crafted Wooden Buckets is that of meat.
The description of the sword in the stone says "known" when it should say "know"
Location: Island -- East -- The Dead plains -- Interiors
At the small Disciple Torizaela rest point there is a broken bookcase, it's description says that most of it's books were either stolen or used as kindly. I believe it shouldve been, Kindle.
In the Fox's Dell circle in Mistlocke, the placeable describing the image of the beetle tribe says "imagine" instead of "image" like the others.
[A small path leads further into the woods. You can see wold tracks all over it. A small campsite has been built nearby, you could probably rest there before continuing.]
Skinnards farm part 1, leading into part 2.
When voting, the confirmation dialogue says "would you like to void for ..."
The armor of Alexius in the order chapel has it's text cut short.
Random scripted invasion sending: Sergeant Barry Pickhem : Citizens are advised to head indoors.An horde of vile Swamp Lizards has been spotted near the gates of Mistlocke. A raid by these foul beasts might be imminent!
Should read:
Sergeant Barry Pickhem : Citizens are advised to head indoors. A horde of vile Swamp Lizards has been spotted near the gates of Mistlocke. A raid by these foul beasts might be imminent!
Mask of Pitiless Flames -
Even as you grasp it, however, the magic is clearning burning away.
In the Shadow Canyon (Dark Canyon?), there is an area right after the second Cell that haw a triggerable flavor text. It currently reads "ld flasks and canisters litter the area ahead...". The first word should be "Old".
I dont know if 'typos' is the right place to put this request... But Anna Alloway in the Mist's End Tavern still says, "A new election is coming up! I don't know why anyone bothers. It will just be Quilby again..."
Unless she is delusional... perhaps this could be updated? Some new rumours please? :)
14:43 < Elmo2> By the way, there seems to be a typo IG
14:43 < Elmo2> The Crown's Smith in the name label
14:43 < Elmo2> Then in sign description
14:43 < Elmo2> The Crown's Smithy
Maybe though it is intentional and the first name label is OOC or something? Feels silly it says twice it is a Smith's place.
One of the forest in-between maps has introductory text that includes "try as you might, you can't help but shake the feeling you are being watched."
It should be "you can't shake the feeling you are being watched."
Otherwise, it means you can't help but feel you aren't being watched at all.
I've encountered a couple of typos lately. They are as follows...
-WARNING: These texts might be of a minor spoiling nature!-
- At the Horn of Ymph, there is a sign with the text "LIFE CANNOT FLOURISH". The description says: "...What once bore a quaint sign to a hamlet now simply bears the following sentance;" "Sentance" should be "sentence".
- In Hyrelican's Seat, Sister Kaganaia has the following dialogue when asked "Hyrelican's Seat?" (or whatever the exact formulation is): "Hyrelican's Seat is one of the first city founded by the..." "City" should be "Cities".
- Also in Hyrelican's Seat, Seer Matriarch Ketacea answers the following when asked about the V-creature being a *spoiler*: ""Some have called it such, yes." [she shakes her name] "But the..."" "Name" should be... Head? Mane, tail? I don't know what Diluvians shake, but it's likely not their names.
- Finally, also in Hyrelican's Seat, Follower of Treliliphus answers to why visitors are important with: "The blood of our nations is said to be the only thing that might save our people /.../ From the words of Hyrenicus that lungbreather should..." "The first "our nations" should be "your nations", "lungbreather" should be "lungbreathers".
Hope these aren't too spoilerific.