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Title: A Package for Miranda Marlin
Post by: ItsAdventureTime on May 07, 2024, 09:59:49 PM
Dear Miss Miranda Marlin,

Enclosed is the cover and first page of the work you commissioned from me. I have drafts of various other pages in various other stages and I anticipate the complete work will be finished by the four weeks estimate I originally provided you.

As I work on these early pages, however, I have come to realize that the transition from cover to first page is quite discordant. I think an introduction or foreword page would resolve that issue and I would like to give you the honour of writing it if you are interested in doing so.

Let me me know what you decide.

Sincerely,
Zaheera Nahaat
Title: Re: A Package for Miranda Marlin
Post by: Miranda Marlin on May 07, 2024, 10:49:45 PM
[a seagull delivers a reply in an envelope marked with a few cantrips warding against casual tomfoolery. It malingers a few moments lest any food be left untended]

Dear Zaheera Nahaat,

It looks very lovely! I do think a foreword or introduction page would be nice, but I don't know that I'm the bird for that job. I didn't know her, and I think the only person I know who did is Amelie, now. You could ask her, maybe? I'm an excellent wizard but a mediocre poet.

Sincerely,
Miranda Marlin.
Title: Re: A Package for Miranda Marlin
Post by: ItsAdventureTime on May 13, 2024, 02:48:09 PM
Dear Miss Miranda Marlin,

Please see included an up-to-date copy with additional pages.

Sincerely,
Zaheera Nahaat
Title: Re: A Package for Miranda Marlin
Post by: Miranda Marlin on May 13, 2024, 07:18:47 PM
[a broom flies to the residence with a seagull perched upon it. While the broom hovers it hops down to deliver its message before hopping back onto it, bird and broom zipping off]

Dear Zaheera Nahaat,

Thank you! It looks very nice. I feel like we keep missing one another in the Well! The next time we cross paths though I do have more of my end of the commission for you. I hope you are doing well with all your projects! You seem very busy!

Sincerely,
Miranda Marlin
Title: Re: A Package for Miranda Marlin
Post by: Miranda Marlin on May 18, 2024, 05:58:50 PM
[a bird-borne letter finds its way over to Zaheera's residence once more]

Dear Zaheera Nahaat,

Next time we run into each other, I have more of the commission. Also! If you have not started work too far along on that other project, I do have my new uniform now! You've seen it, but I didn't know if you needed time to do a sketch if you wanted to incorporate it! Also my magic broom.

Sincerely,
Miranda Marlin.
Title: Re: A Package for Miranda Marlin
Post by: ItsAdventureTime on May 25, 2024, 06:12:58 PM
Dear Miss Miranda Marlin,

Attached is the latest draft of the work. If you are happy with its state, then I humbly submit it as the final product.

Sincerely,
Zaheera Nahaat
Title: Re: A Package for Miranda Marlin
Post by: Miranda Marlin on May 25, 2024, 09:46:35 PM
[a reply arrives by avian messenger]

Dear Zaheera Nahaat,

It looks lovely! I think it is ready for publishing? I should be able to settle the remainder of the costs next we meet! Thank you for your work on this!

Sincerely,
Miranda Marlin